GoldinCow

Unfortunately, your application has been denied because you answered no to the rules. Here is some feedback on what you should fix:

•  Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

• Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding more detail. If you’re lost on what to add, consider describing things like height, eye colour, hair colour, and hair length.

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks must be purely personality; don’t include anything that references your character’s physical disposition.

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you can’t figure out what more to add, here are some questions you can ask yourself: what is your character afraid of? How do they act around strangers? What is their resting disposition?

• Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.

  • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

• Your Character Name is inadequate.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue and one action. 

You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/