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Gonsii69

By Gonsii69

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Dadoking#6118
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Being loyal to your friends and always ready for something.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Acting like a really good player in video games.
    Status: Denied

Alaric was going down a road. He sees people running. He saw a warrior killing people. And he kills him. And from that day he became a warrior named Brave Alaric

Character Name: Alaric
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Has big iron armor. Has green eyes. Has brown hair. His body is strong. Hes tall. Hes 80kg. Has a small nose and small ears.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Your name goes against our rules. You can try again once you CHANGE your name

And to many errors

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that their family was killed this is a common character trope please read up more with this link to see what you need to avoid

  1. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action, your action must be in the 3rd person.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly

  • Your Minecraft Username is not appropriate.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application AFTER you change your name and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

Discord

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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