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By Greasy

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    Discord: ILikeCheese#9103
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: in the simple way just being metagaming like i read how to become a god figure or use magicly powers and also in Ingame realistc takes to place u cannot dm or tell someone in vc hey were getting our ass checks clapped in this city name
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: pretty much power gaming is using unfair/ godly actions to on other character
    Status: Denied

i greeted him when he said welcome 

 

Well Dress Gentlemen: ''what brings u here to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?'' 

 

Me: I came by this Massive City across the ocean to seek adventure and maybe becoming a knight to the king in the throne 

 

The man excited to hear my words 

 

Well Dress Gentlemen: Well we have some quests in the quest board and the king is all ways looking for brave, strong men into his army follow me 

 

The man showing me the rest of the city until to the castle 

 

Well Dress Gentlemen : well this is how far i can go for now but good luck your adventure Sir... oh wait i did't catch your name back in the market my sorries 

 

Me: my name is norrox 

 

Well Dress Gentlemen: well norrox enjoy your stay in the city

 

the Well Dress Gentlemen leaves 

 

 

Character Name: Narrox
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: my character is 189 pounds he is shredded as in fit he has brown hair brown eyes he is 6,2 his attire is normal but also takes pride of almosteverythi
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is inappropriate. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. Also, I'd suggest fixing up the proportions a bit. I'm not sure if a 6'2" muscular man can only be 189 pounds.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response has to be answered as a response to the prompt with at least 1 line of action and 1 line of dialogue. For example: Monk Aafira steps onto the dock with a firm footing, a hand going out to shake that of the man's! "I'm here for adventure." 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [minty#8400]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Melpomenne to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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