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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: greivous#9281
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when someone does something not in the characters character (doing something that would not align with your character)
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: controlling someonelses actions instead of role playing them
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

"well sir, an adventure is good for a change, its great to be able to leave the agricultural areas, but theres more to what i want from here, not just money nor experiences."

Character Name: Jonhas Grievenheim
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: 175 pounds, 6'0" wearing traditional mediveval white shirts and brown pants, brownm eyes, brown hair
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.
     

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action. 
     

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!
     

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!


 

 


 

Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message AlissElyssia. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ GuildedFeathers#0749

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above. 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message AlissElyssia. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ GuildedFeathers0749

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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