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Zowcor121
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: cunt1#5627
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Taking ooc into ic.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Somthing doing somthing that is not possble or realstic or forceing an attack on someone ion an emote fight.
    Status: Denied

*Look's the well dressed man up and down with a right sided smirk with his scared lower lip grining not saying anything yet walks past him.*

 


Character Name: Jax
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: He's rather slender skinny yet he is rather dexterous in nature, being a nature looking human male however he has a scar across his lip.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ Your Character Biography mentions Rohan, a nation that exists in the world of Lord of the Rings. Although Lord of the Craft has a similar name to that book series, it exists in a completely different and unique world. Please remove the mention of Rohan and replace it with something in the Lord of the Craft lore!

 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

→ Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

 

→ Your Character must have a specific goal!

 

→ Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!



After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1854. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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