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By Half_

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: half1205
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: dont do unrealistic moves like one shot lame stuff i usuually use my d 20 for hit stats and things like zat
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: makes characters extremely over powered and ruins the fun and immersion
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

i have came to this land to accompany my lads on their journey and make a name for myself and clear the bad reputation of the orcs by becoming a powerful adventuruer while helping others along the way on their quest

Character Name: Half
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 57
Physical Description: big chokin ork man size of a halfling (hense the name) with the drippiest fits in all the lands
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
 

-Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit! 
 

-Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
 

-Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good. 
 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! Please refer to our Racial Hub for more information.



Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.
 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
 

-Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit! 
 

-Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
 

-Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good. 
 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! Please refer to our Racial Hub for more information.



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.

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