Hattori_Miyamoto

Pending!

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

• Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
• Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
• Your Skin is too reliant on noise shading! Please try to smooth it out!
• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • https://app.grammarly.com/

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Dr Green#4255 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

• https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/
• https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
• https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

• Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
• Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
• Your Skin is too reliant on noise shading! Please try to smooth it out!
• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • https://app.grammarly.com/

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @Dr Green#4255, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/