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HazzLMAO

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Pikachu in immeasurable pain#6475
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using your friends/messages telling you something is going to happen for your own advantage
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: abusing the power you have as a roleplayer to instantly win/use to your advantage at a fight/any situation
    Status: Denied

"Hello! i would love to move here, so i was thinking i should check it out first, and also i was thinking of getting a new mask, do you have one?"

Character Name: Hari
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Tall, but skinny character with a hood and a mask, made from the finest dark green cloth. brown eyes, and very pointy ears.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Both your meta- and powergaming definitions require some changes, as they are not currently up to the server standards. You can read up on the server-used definition here.
  • Your biography is too short, and does not contain any references to the server lore. Make sure you make your biography longer, and mention at least two pieces of server lore. You can find more information on the server lore below.
    • Almaris, the realm we are currently on.
    • Arcas, the previous realm, this is where you character will have been born.
    • The lore for your chosen race, the Wood Elves.
  • Your personality traits/quirks do not include any clear flaws to your character, please make sure they do.
  • The things your character likes and dislikes about himself, as well as their fears need to be expanded upon. Make sure every part here consists of at least two sentences.
  • Your skin is not entirely fitting with the server, as it is too cartoonish currently. If you need help chosing a proper skin, be sure to visit our skin archive. Along with this, make sure your character's skin tone is changed, as it is not currently fitting with the Wood Elf lore, which I linked above.
  • Your roleplay scenario is too short, and does not contain any actions your character undertakes.
  • Before you re-submit your application, please read all the application guidelines. These can be found above the application form, as well as below and sometimes inside of every text field.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message DelfShadowLeader to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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