HermanoQuan

Hey! As you can see, your app is stellar and  almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help. Please do not forget to include at least one example.

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

Character Biography

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

Physical Description

• Your Physical Description is not in accordance with your race or lore! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

  • Here is more about our races! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 Roleplay Scenario Response

•  Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must include at least one piece of dialogue and one actions.

  • For example: Monk Aafira steps off the boat, her clumsy footing stumbling about as she stepped onto the deck. "Woah," she murmurs - her lips curling up into a small grin before her gaze settles onto the man in question. "Hello!" Greeted the woman. "I am here to make new friends- and to help people, of course!" Then, with a brisk nod, she stepped off towards the bustling town!

Skin

• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home

• Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

  • Here is more about the race you chose! : https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

Other

• You must acknowledge the server rules! You can find them here.

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • https://app.grammarly.com/

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

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Once you’ve finished or if you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message Melpomenne) !

Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!

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Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above  ♥

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [minty#8400]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Melpomenne to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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