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Hersh

By Hersh

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I stay in character, I find that as someone who has acted most of his life, its easy to stay in a characters mindset and not deviate.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Well it just wouldnt make sense, and I always stay within the confines of what my character would know
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

"Ah well see, that's the thing" I say with a strange and awkward lisp, "I was hoping you could help me with that, I lost my memory when i got hit over the head with a giant candy cane, and all I remember is my name and that i'm a circus clown!"

Character Name: Hersh
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Short, Skinny, White Eyes, Dressed like a clown
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MockingbirdArt

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it

-Please provide a bit more actions in your roleplay response and change it to 3rd person.

-Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good.

-Please note that the race you chose cannot have "white eyes", please refer to our Racial Hub for more information.



Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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MockingbirdArt

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it

-Please provide a bit more actions in your roleplay response and change it to 3rd person.

-Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good.

-Please note that the race you chose cannot have "white eyes", please refer to our Racial Hub for more information.



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.

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