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Rico

By Rico

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: ricoco#8218
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when you use info that vyou learn out of character in character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when someone plays unfair the game
    Status: Denied

i came here to find a new family since mine was taken from me

Character Name: Rico
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: easily gets mad but overall i am friendly
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Melpomenne

Changed Status to Under Review

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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography features a common character trope! Please change that.
  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.
  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.
  • Your Skin is missing! If you're having problems, you can either paste the screenshot of the skin in the Biography section or you can send it to me over discord. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

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Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message Melpomenne. 

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ minty#8400

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