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HoldMeHoliday
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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Allowing the other person the opportunity to avoid an attack, describing what is trying to be attempted to (like a punch) so the person can choose between dodging or letting the attack hit.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It interferes with the current plot, possibly ruining the experience for others in the roleplay. Can also force people to change the whole roleplay if the information distributed was critical to the storyline.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


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A moment of silence filled the room, almost thicker than the smell of the decaying and molding wood.

 

"Not by choice, ma'am." Jaemie's voice was soft, full of respect despite his usual demanding and cold attitude.

 

"I'm selling my roses and herbs to the town's people for my mother. She's beginning to catch a cold and I'm afraid all I have left are these to pay it off." His pale gray orbs, an asset that commonly made people mistake him for being blind, danced over all the small details in the room. "Though I assume maybe you know her.. since your gaze keeps lingering like you're trying to find some resemblance between us. I'm afraid I don't look exactly like her. My father was not Korean like her, so we bare different facial shapes and my complexion is a little darker than hers." His voice trailed off, the thought of his adventurous father lingering in his mind and causing him to gaze off toward the ceiling before he returned his gaze back to the lady with a shake in his head. This caused his dark hair to cling to his forehead.

 

"My father is currently still not with us, though I assume you know this if you do already know my mother. Last I saw him he proclaimed he would return with riches. I have assumed the role of man of the house every since, and I've been my mother's only caretaker." The conversation was only taking from the little time he had to sell off his already withering plants and his mother could only last so long in her condition.

 

And with how scrawny Jaemie was, Miss Yang would probably be a skeleton compared to him. He would never let his mother starve if it meant he was the one who had food on his plate. "I apologize, I must be off. I will promise you more of my time once I return." Without awaiting her response, he dashed passed her in his thick clothing, hoarding his concealed herbs to his chest. His body lacked much energy, which made him quicken his pace, hoping it make it back home before dawn.


Character Name: Yang Jaemie
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: Shaggy, black hair, pale gray eyes, slightly tanned skin with faint freckles, slim and scrawny frame, 118lbs, 6'2, quality clothing, Korean Descent
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  Keep in mind ethnicities existing irl do not apply directly to lotc's culture.

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  Keep in mind ethnicities existing irl do not apply directly to lotc's culture.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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