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HollandDragon

By HollandDragon

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: HollandDragon#2726
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using OOC in an IC way. Like hearing OOC that someone has died and spreading the news IC
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Forcing actions on other players, and don't give them a option to react to your chars actions
    Status: Denied

emote: raises his brows to the man. "Food and Ale"

the man responds: "Uhhh..... Alright, you haven't been here before have ya?"

Sigurd: "No i haven't. Will ya stop talking if i give ya an awnser."

the man responds with a simple nod.

Sigurd sighs. "Alright, i am hoping to start a family of me own. Maybe get me own business with a shipyard and a farm, maybe some mercenary work." he waves to the man. "Have a good day sir."

Character Name: Sigurd Björnsson Hvitserk
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Sigurd is a very big man of 2,13m,he weighs 138kg and is very well build. He has a big beard with a small braid and long hair with a braid in it.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Both your meta-and powergaming definitions are alright, but I would like you to add an example to both, to show how these terms would be applied to in an in-game scenario.
  • Your biography is missing references to the LOTC server lore. I am looking for at least two. You can find the server lore here, on the wiki.
  • Your roleplay scenario does not entirely follow the required guidelines. What I'm exactly looking for will be detailed below:
    • Must be at least four sentences.
    • Include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.
    • Include at least one action.
    • Cannot include any sort of metagaming or powergaming.
    • Should not project ANY thoughts into emotes. Emotes should only include what others would see, not what your character is thinking.
    • Must be in third person.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message DelfShadowLeader! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message DelfShadowLeader to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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