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HollyOne
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: Preghenella
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I talk to the person telling him that's not cool, and it also ruins the roleplay, and, if he doesn't listen to me i'll report him
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It ruins it because people who engage in metagaming have knowledge outside of the role, which can be unfair
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


*sits cautiously* "Well, I've been leaving the village I was in until a few days ago, when some orcs decided to attack me without warning. I tried to fight, but I simply couldn't against them. They beat me up, and after that, I decided to leave that town for good. Now I'm here, not really sure of my direction..."

*Feeling a little more confident and melancholic* "It's very difficult to leave there, there were so many good moments, both with my closest friends and with my family, but there were hardly anyone really important to me anymore. Some of my friends died in combat, others decided to go to a better place, and the last I heard of them is that they had been captured by humans...

Despite all that, I prefer to leave that place now before continuing to relive those memories that hurt so much now.

But on the other hand, I want revenge, revenge for my friends, my family, for myself *Small tears well up in his eyes* but I know that's doesn´t repair anything, and doesn't give me a second chance to see them."


Character Name: Aurelius Fendrel
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: 1.98m, slim, quite pale, completely blue eyes, formal but very worn and tattered clothing
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!
  

-Please use more actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!



Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!
  

-Please use more actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.

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