Hureecane

Ø  Your metagaming definition is a little vague and your powergaming definition is incorrect. Please add more to these (maybe examples too), and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize)

Ø  Your character’s biography is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include things such as your character’s place of birth, family, profession and any important events that have happened to them.

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

Ø You cannot say that your character can ‘kill almost everyone that comes in his way’ because this is overpowered. Try changing this to something along the lines of him being a skilful warrior, and work towards making him become better through roleplay in the game.

Ø There is no such thing as a martial art that only orcs can learn in the server’s lore. Please remove this and check the wiki before you include information like this in your character’s biography.

Ø Try to describe your character’s sword in more detail than just ‘cool’ and ‘strong’. Remember that you cannot begin with powerful weapons, so it shouldn’t be too different to a regular sword.

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be full sentences of at least five-words.

Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character such as hair colour, eye colour and any other distinguishing features. Please edit this.

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.

You failed to make the required changes in the 24 hour timeframe.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

Ø  Your metagaming definition is a little vague and your powergaming definition is incorrect. Please add more to these (maybe examples too), and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize)

Ø  Your character’s biography is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include things such as your character’s place of birth, family, profession and any important events that have happened to them.

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

Ø You cannot say that your character can ‘kill almost everyone that comes in his way’ because this is overpowered. Try changing this to something along the lines of him being a skilful warrior, and work towards making him become better through roleplay in the game.

Ø There is no such thing as a martial art that only orcs can learn in the server’s lore. Please remove this and check the wiki before you include information like this in your character’s biography.

Ø Try to describe your character’s sword in more detail than just ‘cool’ and ‘strong’. Remember that you cannot begin with powerful weapons, so it shouldn’t be too different to a regular sword.

Ø You must include at least one clear flaw in your character's interesting facts/traits.  A flaw should generally be something to do with the character’s personality/behaviour. These facts/traits must be full sentences of at least five-words.

Ø  Your character description should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character such as hair colour, eye colour and any other distinguishing features. Please edit this.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Communication Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Communication Team members.