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Hydrafighter90
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    Discord: Hydrafighter90
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: The best way is to get to know your character by studying their strengths, weaknesses, and their limits
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It causes your character to act in ways they culturally wouldn't normally act.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


" I am but a weary traveler from afar......  What town is this?"


Character Name: Berzath Kharzein
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Red eyes, height =6'4", dark skin, 200lbs, white hair,
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!

Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes then message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out.
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
 

If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!

WIKI
New Player Hub

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