Icy_Codra

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

This is a copy of your last app

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
• Your Physical Description is modern we do have have jeans

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there.

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

• Your Skin's head is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

• Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

1.  https://app.grammarly.com/

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

Discord

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/