Jump to content

ilikespagetti66

ilikespagetti66

By ilikespagetti66

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: i like cheese#4624
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: your character acting with out of game knowledge
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: telling someone how they will act before they actually do it
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

Gima turns around to face the man "looking for sister actually but some wealth would also be appreciated"  she then struts off into the city wondering what awaits her

Character Name: Gima mosstone
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 95
Physical Description: ginger ,3'8, no freckles, scar across left eye causing it to be blind and has a macramé owl satchel
Screenshot of Skin:
Go to applications

User Feedback

Recommended Comments

audyush

Changed Status to Under Review

 

ApeW0ysrYrq8i7wxbgVDxvUn68KzBJ_WqW6M6H_fNPYsV8HneEe5byazc4z10K3nJyp2Mn_eEb3JWH8gCjklhGskY0l2X4LUhPeBGieCH7YFfPW0bfypWcCxsePgJsJLjmQMbuTd

Hi! As you can see, your application has been put on pending, so you're almost ready! There are just a few changes you need to make, but don't worry- you're doing great! 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! You have one so far, so you only need one more!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character Dislikes Response must be at least two sentences long and include a reason why!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

You will be given 24 hours to correct the needed changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me! 

 

Whenever you are done or have any questions, feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

If you still need help, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

 WIKI

 

YZEd97tezTpKwTeWHE2hSeOGAv_VTWCzc91l_opggtBOAgKetV9DD9uWxNyhrATIYbWpoJy1Tme7JaEpcbvLFj_Euhld4_MHWHrWGdXoyjRoaRxnyGEqqCZ1-A_TEsOCrFDCt7PR

1
Link to comment
Share on other sites
audyush

Uee5hPwN3_A0o26AVkPmGV1HXtojk3Vp7V_xgcB-gvIGzS2oeRIGwjGlBlt4fWjoEMq-GYZi6D2eGYmxtTwPSKENM8jnJSZ3uFF196h7My0RZtnBOQzzNgJ98Jb0YesYSzg-Qfe5

Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied. Please check below for the detailed reasons why. 

  • Unfortunately, your 24 hour editing period has expired... However, don't fret! You are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change everything that is listed! 

You can submit a new application and try again right after, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below! 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums, my discord [ audyush#7358 ], in-game with /message audyush to find me in-game, or you can also use /creq in-game and myself or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

 

 If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

 

Also, I would recommend that you read over the Wiki!

 WIKI


 

YpjRjTTaYWeNlrNqcwCkMgWNSvUc8jw7qIwKWDHsT93452EgamxbVU8RjUjNf33WhVzX34qe6cUCn1lwHAzRz7nZQzbOC1trRk6OlbOdVNnsenjp1j979uDmlkC98qGIQsh3TFXG

1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...