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By fiora

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: ghayals#2019
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you use outside game information that the character would have no way of knowing which will result into you getting a advantage in a row situation.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when you create a situation in roleplay where the other person contributing to the conversation has an action like dying or pain inflicted on them without being able to change the outcome.
    Status: Denied

Me : "I agree this city is very lovely. I have come to see what opportunities I may find or experience." *she said with a smile*  

the man : “Well that sounds lovely I hope you get to experience this city to the fullest. Is there anything I can help you with miss ?” * he said in a curious tone*

Me : “ oh sorry I forgot to introduce myself, I’m Fiora and yes where can I find the nearest bakery I’ve been on the road for a while and I ran out of my food supply. *she said with a kind smile on her face* 

the man : So you see that red stall * he said as he pointed to it*  there’s a store right next to it ask for mrs baker. She has the best sweets in all of Oren. 
Me: well it was a pleasure meeting you ! Thank you for that information. *she said as she extended her hand waiting for him to do the same*

the man: the pleasure is all mine. * he said as he shook the hand and then proceeded to walk away*
 

 

 

Character Name: fiora
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: red braided hair. green eyes and a comfortable green gown. ' /
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

  • Please make sure you only have your character in the Roleplay Scenario

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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