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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: wanglieu#3605
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using informations outside of your characters life to use them as guideance
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: the act of any character doing something they'd realistically be unable to do
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Jofsee
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: he has special eyes that are in the colour of the sky
He has brown hair
He is an archer
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  • Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki pages on and for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
  • There are no assassins on LotC that can change their face as you describe in your backstory. Make sure not to copy ideas from other popular worlds such as Westeros as this is plagiarism.
  • The island of Dorce is not an island in the server’s lore to my knowledge. Because of this you will have to remove it from your character’s backstory. If you think I’m mistaken, send me a message either here on the forums or on discord (I’m Aqua#5363). Make sure to only use lore and places that you find on our server wiki.
  • Your character’s Background is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them. At the moment it is a bit bland and unoriginal.
  • Your character application should not be mysterious or unspecific. This is a backstory of your character from an out of character perspective, not of what people will see in game.
  • The character Description field should be used to describe the physical attributes of your character, such as their build/stature, eye colour, hair colour and any other distinguishing features. Aim for about two sentences.
  • You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s interesting facts/traits. A flaw is generally something to do with a character’s personality/behaviour.
  • Your character’s interesting Facts & Traits must be written as full sentences of at least five words.

  • Your character’s Skin does not fit LotC’s medieval theme. You will need to change this before you can be accepted onto the server. If you’re having trouble finding one, feel free to check out the for use and inspiration!

 


 

 

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

 

 


 

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

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  • You need to fix your Spelling and Grammar throughout your application (especially look out for when you use the word ‘orb’ rather than ‘orc’). It doesn’t need to be perfect, but as it is currently it makes your application difficult to understand.
  • The character Description field should be used only to describe the physical attributes of your character rather than other facts about them (such as that they’re an archer). This should be a description of what another player will see when they look at your character.
  • Your character’s Appearance does not match their skin. You said they have brown hair but their skin clearly has blonde hair. If you’re having trouble finding a skin, feel free to use the LotC Skin Archive. I’d recommend toning down the eye colour as well because it appears a little too unnatural at the moment.

 


 

 

You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. 

 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

 

 


 

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

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You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

  • You need to fix your Spelling and Grammar throughout your application (especially look out for when you use the word ‘orb’ rather than ‘orc’). It doesn’t need to be perfect, but as it is currently it makes your application difficult to understand.
  • The character Description field should be used only to describe the physical attributes of your character rather than other facts about them (such as that they’re an archer). This should be a description of what another player will see when they look at your character.
  • Your character’s Appearance does not match their skin. You said they have brown hair but their skin clearly has blonde hair. If you’re having trouble finding a skin, feel free to use the LotC Skin Archive. I’d recommend toning down the eye colour as well because it appears a little too unnatural at the moment.

 


 

Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.

 

 


 

Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.


 

You may reapply at any time.


 

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