Ionixcloud

Hello! Your application has unfortunately been denied. Please check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right away. Just make sure you correct the things listed!

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Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference. Please remember to include at least one. This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some:

• https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
• https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
• https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Characters 

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Your Character Biography is a little short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

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Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race.

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Your Physical Description states you are 110 grams. Please adjust that to a realistic weight (a 5'5 human typically weighs around 136 pounds, or 62 kg).

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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

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Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

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Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

• https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

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Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please adjust either description or skin, so they match.

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Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of quoted dialogue and one action. 

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Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one.

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Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one.

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Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person.

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Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

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Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

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Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

• https://app.grammarly.com/

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Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Nikophos#0864].

If I’m not around, you can also ask for help in the LotC Discord: https://discord.gg/lotc

I also recommend reading the wiki: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page