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iPsyxho
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: De℘͢͢͢ressed#3129
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: idk
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: idk
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

to kill those who harmed my family.


Character Name: iPsyxho
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: one eye completely black, one eye completely white., black clothes. normal body,(not muscular nor thin.
Screenshot of Skin:



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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 


Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [minty#8400]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Melpomenne to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

 

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