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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Knowing something that your character does not.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Focus on one goal and doing anything to get to that goal
    Status: Denied

"Hello there" I would start "Do you know anybody that might be able to tell me about my past? I came here because I heard this city was big and I lost my memories, so do you know someone?"

Character Name: ClockWork
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 324
Physical Description: Furnace in the middle of the chest for fuel, He is the color of spruce planks and has a plate of armor covering his face, chest and shoulders.
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Your application has been denied at this time. The primary reason regards your character being a 'Robot'. This does not exist in our lore. The closest to that is an Atronach or Golem- all of which are acquired in game through roleplay and a CA (Creature/Construct Application). Feel free to apply again at any point! In addition....

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character is a robot. This not only does not exist in our lore, but it also would have required a CA (Creature Application).This is against our server rules! Please review them once more and make sure you fully understand them!

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

  • Your Character Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's like connects with their biography!

  • Your Character Dislike is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's dislike connects with their biography!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

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