itz_Timmy

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Settlements

• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

• Your Character Drive is a bit lacking, please add some more detail, what do they want to achieve in life? What drives them?

• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

• Your Character Fear Response refers to lore that does not exist in the LOTC universe (enderdragon). Please amend your app to reflect this!

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one.

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one.

My discord is Joshua#2340! If you have any questions I’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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