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By javseb

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: javii#1687
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Is when you have some information in rol that has happened but that your character can't know. For exapmle you are in disc with you friends and you hear information but this information cant be know by your character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: is when someone Is being Unfair, and very Unrealistic To the situation. Which could Mean they are trying to make themselves Ulitmatley Unkillable and making the experince of the roleplay Unenjoyable for other players.
    Status: Denied 
javi says:
"Hi, I'm Javier, I come to explore in search of achieving my dream one day. I would like to met new people if it is possible knights becaus i want to train with them and visit  important places of the city. Can you give me a city tour?"
 

  

 
Character Name: Javi kenway
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Im 6,03ft tall, im blondy with green eyes like bioluminescent , my weight is 180lb and i wear military indumentary like a knight.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please just fix the eyes on your skin. They seem to be bioluminescent. 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message _Bueno_. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Zed#4474

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here 

: https://discord.gg/lotc

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Didn't fix all the changes in time! Feel free to reapply.

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zed#4474]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message _Bueno_ to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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