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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Yisus God#0479
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: es una canal de chat por el cual puedes hablar todo tipo de cosas que no tengan que ver con el ROL del Juego, ósea que no podemos decir por OOC, en este caso centrémonos en /b por ejemplo: /b Oye amigo me darías un poco de dinero para alimentarme...
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: PowerGaming tambien llamado PG es realizar acciones que te resultarían imposible hacer en la vida real. Ejemplo: Poner '/intentar huir. ' mientras te apuntan 4 personas armadas.
    Status: Denied

Llegue con mi hermano de una isla muy lejana a esta hermosa ciudad

Character Name: Kevin
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Ropa negra y capa negra, ojo azules, color piel balanco, peso 60 kilos, color de cabello negro, constitución corporal grueso, Altura 1.95
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Amelica

Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to it being in a language other than English. However, here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Please apply in English.
  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must have its dialogue in quotes to distinguish it from the action.


After correcting the above errors, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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