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Your application has been put on pending at this time due to reasons listed below, please make sure to fix all addressed problems so you may be accepted onto our server:

Important: Despite the server name, this is not a Lord of the Rings server - we have our own custom lore. Make sure your application doesn't have any references to LoTR and instead is based around LoTC. Additionally, please take the time to double-check your work, and fix any grammatical/spelling errors.

I have included some links for you to refer to, and incorporate into your application.

Races:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

Nations and Major Settlements:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Settlements

Backstory: Your character's backstory is based around the franchise of Lord of the Rings, which our server has no relation to. Please modify your backstory to be suitable with our server's lore, and don't reference anything from LoTR. Additionally, please don't make your character out to be a 'hero' from the very beginning - make your character's backstory of humble beginnings, and leave any 'major feats' such as slaying a dragon out of it.

Character Skin/Description: Your character's description does not match the character skin you have applied with. Please fix this.

Roleplay Scenario: Your roleplay scenario needs serious work as well. Treat it like a normal roleplay interaction, and keep it simple if you find it difficult. It's just a way for us to determine your roleplay quality, and make sure it meets our server's standards. In your next roleplay scenario, please include the following:

- Have your roleplay scenario be AT LEAST four sentences long.

- Include at least one dialogue surrounded by quotes.

- At least one action, where your character is doing something physical.

- Make sure your roleplay scenario doesn't have any metagaming, or powergaming in it.

- Do not include any personal thoughts into your emote. Emotes should be physical, and something that other people would be able to see/feel/hear.

- Make sure you write it out in third person.

You will be accepted once the aforementioned things are fixed. Don't be disheartened, and don't give up - if things are too hard, feel free to reach out to me either the Forums via a PM, or contact me directly on my Discord: D A N N Y#2022.

Best of luck, I hope to see you on the server soon.

Your application has unfortunately been DENIED at this time due to reasons listed below. Please read through them, and make the appropriate changes before applying again.

No Improvement: You haven't edited your application, or fixed any of the problems listed.

Feel free to re-apply at any time after this denial, just make sure you make the changes with the aforementioned things. Don't be disheartened, and don't give up - if things are too hard, feel free to reach out to me either the Forums via a PM, or contact me directly on my Discord: D A N N Y#2022.