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BeKhan1324

By BeKhan1324

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: be_khan#6917
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: for me meta gaming is like something you do in the game but you find out about it from your friend on whatsapp.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is like defining yourself as a god or something superior to others.
    Status: Denied

-  Hi, dear friend, I am seeking revenge on my parents' murderer.

Character Name: Baki
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: Costumes: Armor. Blue eyes. Hair Color: Black. Height: 1.74. Strong. Weight: 82 kilos.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that you were born into the "king's elite group." You'd need explicit permission from said king in order to add that into your backstory. Please use a more lore-appropriate backstory

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zed#4474]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message _Bueno_ to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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