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    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: jizilmoney#3701
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is basically having your in game characters do something or affect something they shouldn't know about because its outside knowledge and wasn't learned from the role play
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power gaming is committing a action that is just overpowered and unfair to the other role players because there's not much they can do about it
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

"Aww the big city, its finally time to make dad proud" I see a well dressed man coming towards me and he asks me what brings me to the city. I say "Its not the Adventure, Wealth or my place in society, I'm here to fulfil not only my dream but my dads as well" I will make him proud I think. I walk towards the shops to see if I can buy a new house and settle down for now. At the shops I buy the closest house to all the shops because I will need to be there a lot to pull of my plan.

Character Name: Arwen
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: He is a beige skinned elf that has dark blue eyes, long grey hair, and wears a suit. He is a slim elf that weighs about 150 pounds and is 6'5
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your powergaming definition is not quite what I'm looking for yet. Although headed in the right direction, I would like you to rewrite it, and include an example of how powergaming could be applied in game. If you need more information on the term, you can visit this page.
  • Your biography is still missing two references to the server lore. Below you can find some links to help you on your way to find the lore for your app.
  • Your roleplay scenario has to be written from the third person perspective, not the first.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message DelfShadowLeader! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message DelfShadowLeader to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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