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Witherking
  • Rules: No
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: owenkeir
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: by staying focused on the lore
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: you could leak information and people coords if you are roleplaying and ruin the roleplaying the experience
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

You speak of your journey, filled with twists and turns, trials and triumphs. You tell of the hardships you've endured, the friendships you've forged, and the dreams that have driven you forward. The old hag listens intently, nodding occasionally as if she already knows the words before they leave your lips.

As you speak, you notice a subtle shift in the atmosphere of the tent. The candles flicker erratically, casting strange shadows on the walls. You feel a chill run down your spine, but you press on, compelled to share your story with this mysterious woman.

Finally, as you reach the climax of your tale, the old hag leans forward, her eyes alight with a strange intensity. "Yes, I see it now," she murmurs, almost to herself. "Your destiny is intertwined with the fate of this town, with its secrets and its sorrows."

You swallow hard, suddenly aware of the weight of her words. "What do you mean?" you ask, your voice barely above a whisper.

The old hag smiles, a knowing gleam in her eye. "There are forces at work here beyond your understanding," she replies cryptically. "But fear not, for I can sense the strength within you. You have the power to change the course of history, to bring light to the darkness that shrouds this place."

With a wave of her hand, the candles flare brightly, illuminating the tent with an otherworldly glow. You feel a surge of determination coursing through your veins, as if you've been awakened to a purpose greater than yourself.

As you rise to leave the tent, the old hag's voice follows you like a whisper on the wind. "Remember," she calls after you, "the fate of this town rests in your hands. Choose wisely, for the choices you make will shape the future for generations to come."

With those words echoing in your mind, you step out into the swampy darkness, ready to face whatever challenges lie ahead. For you know now that you are not alone, that destiny has led you to this place for a reason. And with a newfound sense of purpose, you set out to fulfill your destiny, whatever it may be.

 

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"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…


Character Name: Witherking
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: A strong well built character a noble leader who will lead his army to victory for his kingdom
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

 

 

-Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are (royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy), please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story. 

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  CAnt be the wither

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate - CANT BE A WITHER/TOO MODERN. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is for exactly what yourself would do to avoid committing powergaming not what to do when you come across it.

 

 

-Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you are (royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy), please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story. 

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  CAnt be the wither

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate - CANT BE A WITHER/TOO MODERN. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you!

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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