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JohnnyBoii099


JohnnyBoii09
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i just play minecraft to chill, not powergame
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it could change the story for the worse
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

I sit down. "My name is Johnny. I was fishing when an awful storm blew in. I hit my head, and woke up on a beach not too far from here." I look around uncomfortably, as I want to get out of there. "How did you know I was coming?"

 


Character Name: Johnny
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 5'4", 110 lbs, blonde hair, green eyes, wears ragged leather
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

-It looks like your minecraft username is misspelled or not a Java account! Please provide the corrected username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat!
 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

-Please change your character's actions to 3rd person.



Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-It looks like your minecraft username is misspelled or not a Java account! Please provide the corrected username! You should be able to find it by going into a single player world by hitting tab or typing in chat!
 

-Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

-Please change your character's actions to 3rd person.



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.

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