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Aias Zannettos

By Aias Zannettos

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    Discord: Reloading_#7276
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when you learn something throughout discord or any social media that you dont know by rp
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when you get hurt or do something that irl it's not physically capable to do
    Status: Denied

Hello How are you sir? My name is Phimoira Alderspark i am here to have adventures and discover the meaning of friendship. i want to learn to live my life at maximum
 

Character Name: Phimoira Alderspark
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: a tall brunette elf with slightly dark skin pointy ears and brown eyes.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zed#4474]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message _Bueno_ to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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