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Kaert

By Kaert

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    Discord: Audric#0174
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: that's the character you are in a certain role you play
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: using extraordinary, divine or magical powers
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Character Name: Nemo
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: tall, strong, brown hair and eyes
Screenshot of Skin:
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • You cannot play a lizard creature, please stick to one of the main races: humans, elves, dwarves, orcs, halflings.

  • The picture you linked is a plagiarized character sheet that you cannot use on LoTC.

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your wanted achievements must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason.

  • Your fears must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit lacking. You must include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes, and at least one action. 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Rin is Alive#0001 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message RinIsSalty to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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