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    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Tauras#0643
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is that u can't do it in realLife
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is like for and emote and kill the man instantly
    Status: Denied

Hi im here for adventure any tips and could u show me around the city ?


Character Name: Tauras
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: Hes eyes are blue hair is brown hes got some muscles hes height is 7 feet he weighst 200 pounds hes skin collor is yellow ar white
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many errors

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action, Action has to be in the 3rd person.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

  1. https://app.grammarly.com/

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

Discord

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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