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Kikinou30
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: kikinou30
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: To avoid Powergaming, players are encouraged to alter their phrasing to suggest an 'attempt' at an attack, and by allowing the opposing player to emote in response to such an attempt.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: c'est de la triche
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


- Hello Armina, you'll be happy ... I've got your knife. Here it is. 't wasn't easy. I had to get rid off the guardian. Haha.  Now I'm running out of strength. I need my potion. Give it to me.

- The other items ?

- Mmm The cup is still in the hand of its owner, and for the breath, I still have no idea where to look for it. But now I can't take another step. I'm running out of time. Give me the potion.

- Sure, I will give my part of our arrangement before the end of your mission. We both know how you're trustworthy. There is absolutely no risk that you drove my ennemy directly to my lair. There is absolutely no risk that once you're sure to get what you're looking for, you give them the signal to attack. 'The witch blow out a candle, all candles are blowed out in the same time.

- Heeee

- Now, remind me Gorki, what were the terms of our agreement in case of betrayal ?

 

I wield the knife and begin to back up to the exit.

- Armina don't move, else I kill you

- and your potion Gorki ? (I listen this is coming from behind me)

 

<Not RP> I know I'm answering slightly Off-topic but I was inpisred on this. ^^

Else I would answer : <RP again>

 

- I'm running out of time. I need your help.

- I know. You need my potions. But all healing begins with redemption, redemption with prey, and prey with talking. Talk.

- As you want, witch. But you will be deceived. I'm nobody. Son of farmer, the 5th one, I wasn't expected. My mother died giving me birth. I was not loved, I had to work. I had to pay.

hhhhh

I'm the cursed one of the family.

And then, one day, the buttons on my face. then my hands. then the disease. Leprosy. They chased me away. They all chased me away.

*cof cof*

I joined a group of people like me. Nad not like me. We were mendiant. and some times thieves. and some times more.

I'm tired of this. I've heard of you. An apothicary told us he knew a way to heal. My companions didn't believe him. I did. I helped him to flee. And he told me about you and here.

 

 

 

 


Character Name: Gorki The leper
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: 1,70m; 50kg, hair : lost, eye : brown, has damaged and dirty clothing, hide his head because of the leper. A stick with a rattle. A bag with his stuff
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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

→ Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

→ Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!  

→ Please make sure for your roleplay scenario and backstory to just keep it simple no need for the extra lines her is an example: Gorki would walk into the tent "Hello there, I am from [Place].

→ Please make sure to only roleplay as your character!

 

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @blake0205 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

→  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is blake0205! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @Blake0205.

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! https://discord.com/invite/lotc

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/212839-new-player-hub

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