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Kindred_blood
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using things that you learn outside of the games roleplay system to advance your knowledge and or abilities in game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: using a unrealistically powerful character to pull off unbelievable feats of strength agility or mental prowess
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. 

 

A: Daiseren calmly states i only seek to help those in need and if i can fight some interesting opponents on the way then the more fun for me.


Character Name: Daisearen Kaoris
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A tall burly young man with long braided hair as black as the night sky he dawns a simple black shirt with dark blue pants his eyes hold a golden hue
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Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

 

You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

  • Your backstory was well-written, however there are some run on sentences and spelling error (For Example: Sutica being spelled as Sudica).
  • Your roleplay response needs an action, not just dialogue. You may use the example to figure out how to format your response.
  • Your skin is not up to par with the server’s quality, but fret not; LoTC has a Skin Archive for players who cannot make their own skins, or need a temporary skin until they can make their own. These skins are Free to Use.

When you have made the changes, feel free to

 contact me through discord at @mightbepan#9864 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

in our New Player Discord.

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Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes within the 24 hours you were given.

Here are the changes you had to make.

 

  • Your backstory was well-written, however there are some run on sentences and spelling error (For Example: Sutica being spelled as Sudica).
  • Your roleplay response needs an action, not just dialogue. You may use the example to figure out how to format your response.
  • Your skin is not up to par with the server’s quality, but fret not; LoTC has a Skin Archive for players who cannot make their own skins, or need a temporary skin until they can make their own. These skins are Free to Use.

You may reapply at any time.

 

If you find yourself in need of any assistance,

do send a Community Team Member or myself a friend request over discord

and PM them or myself at @mightbepan#9864. I’d be more than happy to help.

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