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By apollito

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: apollito
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: by avoiding using concrete or definitive language. instead of saying "i stab you through your armor" id be better to phrase "i slice my sword forward aiming at your left should" which gives the other player time to respond
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: by refraining from using information my character should not know about
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

i take a quick look around the area before pulling out a near by chair, set my bag on the floor and sit "well, i wouldnt call this a dingy town. everyplace has something of worth, even if its just memories, dont ya think? I see my letter reached you, unfortunately i dont have much of a story to tell. Just looking for an old friend is all- heard you might know something about him?"

Character Name: apollo
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: height: 5' 11''
weight: 160
hair: black
eyes: brown
outfit: generic white shirt with a tattered brown leather jack
apollos your generic human
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NotAPan

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

 

- Your roleplay scenario must be in third person.

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is notapan ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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NotAPan

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

 

- Your roleplay scenario must be in third person.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  notapan ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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