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Koma

By Koma

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Koma#0939
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Getting information out-of-character to use to your advantage in-character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Role playing an god-like overpowered figure and role playing outside of you characters limits and abilities.
    Status: Denied

Koma slowly looks up to the gentleman's face and gives him cold stare. Eventually, he responds with “I am just here to visit a friend.” Right just before the gentleman could continue talking, Koma ignores the man and continues walking through the market. Koma murmured  “I don’t have the time to be dealing with such nuisances, I have already wasted enough time.

Character Name: Koma Kurheye
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Ancient traditional Shinobi fighting clothes, white hair, green eyes, cut and athletic body type, 6'0 (183cm's), 160 pounds (75 kg)
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Amelica

Changed Status to Under Review

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because you did not make the required corrections on time. Here is some feedback on what you should have fixed: 

 

  •  Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  •  Your Character Biography states that your character leads his peers. Prior to joining the server, your character cannot be a leader, nor can he be well-known. All such respect must be earned through active roleplay on the server.

  • Your Physical Description is inconsistent with your character’s race. Please visit the wiki page for said race and read about the acceptable physical attributes.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC’s standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you can’t find anything better.


You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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