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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Keep things realistic. For example, if my character is 5'4 and slim, there's no way they're taking down a 6'1 and buff orc or something.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Don't let ooc chatting effect ic roleplaying. For example, If I let my rp group know that I'm planning on killing someone's character, other characters can't get suspicious of me for no reason
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

Willow's elf ears twitch, hearing the sound of the old hag's voice. 

 

"Depending on what you just said I assume I'm at the right place," Willow responded.

 

She sat down on the cushion, and looked around taking note of the many potions and such that were stored on the shelves. 

 

"I was in the woods collecting herbs. My mother is sick, and while father works I'm taking care of her. I'm actually studying medicine. I want to be an herbalist. In the woods

 

I heard whispers. Like the forest spirits were luring me to something..or somewhere", Willow said.

Willow often looked around when she spoke, unable to hold eye contact. She was surprised to see that the old hag moved from the back of the tent to sit in front of her. She hadn't seen her move so fast. The old hag looked interested in what Willow had to say, and Willow almost felt compelled to continue speaking. 

 

"I really don't know why I listened to these voices. I'm usually more smarter than to follow random voices through the woods, but this was different. I've spent 19 years in my village, doing things I'm told, and living the life I know, but what I really want is to go on an adventure. I love my family and I love my village, but I feel like there's more out there for me. My mother always tells me that the world is so big.." 

 

Willow shut up, thinking she was talking too much. When she looked down she noticed a scroll sitting on the table in between her and the old hag. Once again she was surprised because she didn't see the old hag put it there. She grabbed the paper, looking at the old hag, but the old hag didn't say anything. She just looked at her.

 

"Thank you?" Willow said getting up from the cushion and walking out the door, with the scroll in her hand.

 

The door quickly shut behind her. 

 

"Was I supposed to look at this in front-" 

 

Willow turn around to see that the tint had disappeared. She stood there perplexed.

 

"Okay..."

 

Willow put the scroll in her satchel and began walking back to her village.  


Character Name: Willow
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Willow is a 5'3 elf with long, dark, brown hair. She has green eyes, and wears semi-revealing clothing, though she doesn't view her outfit that way.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

In your roleplay dialogue, you wrote: I heard whispers. Like the forest spirits were luring me to something..or somewhere", Willow said.

Please note that up until you're accepted, your character has been a background character, meaning there they cannot have any special ability related to magic that includes knowing or being able to use them. Please change this section.

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is KaptainScarlet If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @KaptainScarlet

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

In your roleplay dialogue, you wrote: I heard whispers. Like the forest spirits were luring me to something..or somewhere", Willow said.

Please note that up until you're accepted, your character has been a background character, meaning there they cannot have any special ability related to magic that includes knowing or being able to use them. Please change this section.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @KaptainScarlet

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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