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Kwabberneute

By Kwabberneute

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: HetIsKwabber#2500
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Helping your Teammate's or ally's to defeat the enemy and have a stronger relationship
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Trying to do some action to help or kill the player with the help of the chat
    Status: Denied

"Thank you, Im here to join the Army and make a lot of adventures" with a big smile on my face :) 
Walks slowy away because the adventure is about too start!

Character Name: Soren Fade
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Blue eyes, A scar on the left side. Hair color black. height normal mc skin/ Weight 75kg.
Scar on the back of the side.
Normal body for the resst
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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→ Your Character Biography seems to contain a common trope. In this case, the trope of parents being killed by Orcs. Please remove this trope and replace it with something more unique. 

 

→ Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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