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Thundar Gurson
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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: You avoid powergaming simply by not being unrealistic. You cant expect to control the situation by controlling an outcome based on 1 line of events. Play into the situation instead of stating how it is going to play out.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming, gives an opposing player or group of players an unfair advantage by providing information that would be unrealistic in a real life situation. Use circumstances such as as the crow flies or delivering messages via horseback. There are no cell phones in Role Playing.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

(After staring into her eyes for a brief moment)  

 

Famine and war has brought me to these lands.  My journey has been one of not just treachery, but treason and death.  For the only ones who survived are my son(Magnus Gurson), his friend, and Myself.  Our land was ravaged by the Orcs.  To there side were rogue clans of Goblins and Dark Elves.  We the Brael'k clan along with the Armies of Northern Kredor Alliance fought them for many moons.  But, our victories did not come without it's price.  For, the Orcs who we battled within our pastures were cursed and their blood seeped into the roots of life.  On the 4th blood moon, our crops began to die and those who ate from the cursed fields soon fell from the endless torment plagued within their soul.  Those of whom were able, sought refuge with the Camphor Tribe.  These event have led what is left of my tribe to these lands.
 


Character Name: Thundar Gurson
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 35
Physical Description: heavy build, and is 4'1" tall and weighs 135 pounds. He has deep tan skin, grey eyes and short brown hair with a beard
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

-Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states X person is your backstory, are they a player on the server or an npc. If they are a player, please either provide a screenshot of them saying that you can join or them giving the okay for you to use their character in your backstory, Or please give us the contact information so we can double check! 

-Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!  

 

-Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!



Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states X person is your backstory, are they a player on the server or an npc. If they are a player, please either provide a screenshot of them saying that you can join or them giving the okay for you to use their character in your backstory, Or please give us the contact information so we can double check! 

-Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!  

 

-Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord
 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!

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