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LaitDemon
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Исаользование информации которую персонаж физически не может знать
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Использование сил и/или вещей которыми не обладает персонаж
    Status: Denied

Lait was born in a small town near the forest. Because of his color of eye his shied away passers-by and he hated people. As the town in which he lived was the wilderness there came a time when it is not what it was to study and he went to the capital of the elves to learn something new.


Character Name: Lait
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: A red eyed elf who hates humans and dwarwes
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦ This is an English speaking server, see if you can rewrite the definitions in English. Same goes for the "Interesting facts" that also has to be written in English.

 

 

 

✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well as this is a roleplay server and your character must have a backstory.

 

✦ Your character descriptions seem rather lackluster, try to add something about the characters features like color of their hair, eyes or how tall they might be.

 

✦ Do note that your character cannot start with any magic potential, such as necromancy.

 

✦ Your skin doesn't seem appropriate with LoTC standards, perhaps you could look through our skin archive for temporarily skins before you're able to acquire a more personal skin.

 

✦ Keep in mind that elves don't culturally turn into adults before they become 50 years old.

 

 

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

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Your time has expired, you may re-apply immediately.  

Please do refer to the other post above for the following changes you need to do before your application can finally be accepted.

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