LaitDemon

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

✦ This is an English speaking server, see if you can rewrite the definitions in English. Same goes for the "Interesting facts" that also has to be written in English.

✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well as this is a roleplay server and your character must have a backstory.

✦ Your character descriptions seem rather lackluster, try to add something about the characters features like color of their hair, eyes or how tall they might be.

✦ Do note that your character cannot start with any magic potential, such as necromancy.

✦ Your skin doesn't seem appropriate with LoTC standards, perhaps you could look through our skin archive for temporarily skins before you're able to acquire a more personal skin.

✦ Keep in mind that elves don't culturally turn into adults before they become 50 years old.

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

can i take one from the skins for the example and make an another like this?

Yes, you can indeed use one of the skin from the skin archive.

thanks

Your time has expired, you may re-apply immediately.  

Please do refer to the other post above for the following changes you need to do before your application can finally be accepted.