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By SoraDesu

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Bachelier #6066
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i would normally stop the roleplay or call people out
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: like before i would normally stop it or call these said people out
    Status: Denied

Sora was born an orphan, raised by his foster parents. growing up he always fascinated by flames, while playing around a bon fire he accidentally bends the fire around him so he found out that he has a affinity for fire. with that knowledge he started to trained his new found abilities, not only to protect himself but also to protect others with it. years later he is gonna use his fire abilities when a group of people who is gonna deforest his home town so he alerted  the the local guard, by the time he came back to the scene he witnessed his foster parents unfortunately died in a crossfire, reasonably angry he charged to the people who killed his parents he stopped all the people who's gonna deforest his home. they all cheered but some who witnessed the death with him comforted him about it.

Character Name: Sora
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Imagine Legolas but instead of a bow and arrow its flame
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AnimeWolf0080

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming & Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here
  • https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
  • Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good.
  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!  
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me!

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming & Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here
  1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
  • Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good.
  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!  
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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