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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Rephrase your action as an attempt at doing it, let the other player decide the outcome.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: There is a barrier between player and character that must be respected, and overstepping it and not acting within your character can create some undesirable situations.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

I don't respond at first, studying the room. As my eyes reach her unfamiliar face, I tell her she must be thinking of someone else. No one has been expecting me in a long, long time. 


Character Name: Ih
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 50
Physical Description: They look old. Their hair is turning gray. 6'1, 200 pounds, green eyes. They are genderless and look very androgynous. They are healthy and agile.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
 

-Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

-Please change your character's actions to 3rd person.



Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

-Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
 

-Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

-Please change your character's actions to 3rd person.



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.

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