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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: lennon whyte#0969
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset, uses external factors to affect the game, or goes beyond the supposed limits
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when a player leaves no room for the action
    Status: Denied

You’ve just stepped off of the boat in the port of a massive and fortified city. Before you lies a sprawling bazaar, with numerous shops, stalls, and seated traders selling wares to folk of all walks of life. Just as you’re about to continue walking onwards, into the market, you’re approached by a well-dressed gentleman who looks upon you with a big smile. “Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?”
How do you respond? uh well uh???

Character Name: danny
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: blue eyes bit chubby
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition and your Powergaming Definitions are plagiarized, as well as incorrect. 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography needs to be strictly backstory, please do not include things such as likes, phobias, or physical descriptions.

  • Your Skin and Physical Description do not match.

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your fears must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason.

  • Your likes must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason. 

  • Your dislikes must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is incomplete. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Rin is Alive#0001 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message RinIsSalty to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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