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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: II have never been on a roleplay server, but in case I detect powergaming during my stay, I would report it to other people to confirm that this type of behavior is incorrect.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: From what I understand, rules have to be followed for a roleplay to be constant and fun for everyone, and metagaming is unfair behavior since it breaks the roleplay chain.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))
My name is Anfur and I come from a city very far away. I loved my home, I had everything there was to have, love, money, but overnight, I was exiled from my home. They accused me of murder, and I tried to convince them that it was not true, but there was no option and they expelled me from the city. I haven't eaten anything for 10 days, and I ended up in this place talking to you.

Character Name: Anfur Pernelsh
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: A handsome young prince, with blue eyes, with torn clothes and muddy feet.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

 

Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good. 

 

Your Physical Description states that you are (royalty/nobility/notable/well-known/ too wealthy), please remember you’ve been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, You’ll be the main character in your own story. 

 

Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

 

Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit! 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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