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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Finding out something in real life and using that in role-play when your character wouldn't know that
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Being godly in role-play
    Status: Denied

    The endless swaying of the boat and how grateful she was to be on solid ground was the only thing on Alala’s mind as she stepped onto the port. She gazed into the massive city and spotted the reds and blues of the market tents, alright Alala you can do this, one foot in front of the other like we practiced. She must have been so focused on walking that she didn’t see the well-dressed man approach her.

   A smile lit his face, “Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?”

   You can do this, answer him, the man stood there awkwardly, a smile still on his face, come on Alala, he’s waiting!  “Potatoes!” Stars above Alala how stupid are you, she mentally slapped herself in the head as the man’s smile faltered.

 “Well that was not expected,” he ran a hand over his scruffy beard. “We do have an excellent vegetable booth that should suit a pretty lady,” he glanced at her pointed ears, “Er, elf-maiden such as yourself.”

  Warmth flooded through her as she quickly glanced around trying to come up with some excuse to leave him. “Thanks,” she yelled as she quickly dashed off towards the market place.

  “What an odd elf-maiden,” she heard him mutter as she rounded the corner trying to calm her racing heart.

  Two days of practicing what you where going to say when you got here and you still managed to screw it up, stars above how will I survive in this massive place. 

  Something hard hit her on the head. “Usually street rats will come when you offer them food,” a deep voice laughed.

  She blinked letting her eyes adjust to the darkness of the alley, “Just who do you think you’re calling street rat,” she placed her hand on her hip.

  A hooded figure stepped closer to her, “Who else is here honey?” He pulled down his hood causing her to gasp.

  “Dax,” she whispered as she took in the older male before her. Whirls of black circled his neck and arms as he stepped closer. I wonder what else they encircle, warmth flooded through her as she realized where her thoughts were going, no this is Dax, Alala.

 “The Gods must have blessed us to bring us together again.”

  Indeed the stars must have blessed them.


Character Name: Alala Fernsby
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Her skin-tone is fair and is 5'4. Her hair is a light burgundy and her eyes are green with golden specs. She has an hourglass figure and weighs 120 Ib
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • High elves can’t have pink hair and 5’6” is the shortest one can be. So please fix that.

 

  • Your character is too young to be born in Aegis because Aegis was many years ago yet you’re 18.

 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message TheBelidle! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at TheBelidle#0064.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

 

Once you are done changing the listed, please leave a comment or send me a text on discord.

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change  all that is listed below ❤️

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [TheBelidle#0064]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message TheBelidle to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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