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By LilUziVert

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    Discord: Lil Uzi Vert#1600
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is using irl knowledge and loopholes to gain an advantage in game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is when you break character and do non-roleplay stuff while roleplaying, for instance things that wouldnt normally be possible
    Status: Denied

"Hello," I respond "I am always keen on finding a way to make some money. Hopefully one day I could become the richest man in the city! That would be quite remarkable, don't you think? Unless you have any suggestions, I'll be continuing on exploring the city and fulfilling my dream!"

Character Name: Vokai Cervos
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Fair-skinned, 5'11", 130 pounds, lean, usually wearing a black scholar's coat, long black pants with a white design, black shoes
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KaiserJacobII

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. You need an example for each.

 

→ Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

 

→ Your Character Biography mentions specific events your character is too young to have experienced, such as the Schism War.

 

→Your Physical Description states that they are fair-skinned. Dark Elves can not be fair-skinned. Read more about Dark Elves here.

 

→ Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please give an explanation as to why your character fears what they fear.

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

 

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Kaiser Jacob II#1965. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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