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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Let them know and maybe set or follow strict rules when roleplaying.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It disrupts fair roleplay as the information was not yours to be told
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


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"Oh! Um...Hello! Well I came from a small country town. There wasn't many people there as it was quite small and only housed about 100 people or so. I'm the 1st born daughter to the Elrick family, alongside my 2 older brothers, Grayson and Arthur. My brothers were constantly helping out my father manage the farms and do any local town work. Whilst my mother and I would spend our time picking flowers in the forest nearby and looking at the wildlife. One morning I'd awoken to my mother in bed, she'd fallen ill from a disease which made her bones brittle. From then on we stopped going and visiting the forest...my brothers began to fight a lot more and were constantly at each others throats. It was late noon when I was interrupted by a loud cluster of noise coming from the kitchen of our house. Arthur and Grayson were fighting again...this time it was the worst one they'd had. Arthur began to shout at Grayson about something and it escalated to them pushing and shoving each other which eventually lead to them fighting. I tried to stop it but they wouldn't listen and just shoved me aside. It was shortly broken up by some of the stronger people in the village. The next morning I woke up to Arthur leaving with saying nothing but just giving me a cold glare. Grayson didn't say much from that day and all I had left was my father who tried his best to keep the family together. As soon as I turned 18 I left the village to travel and try to search for Arthur, for answers. Which brings me to my current state..."


Character Name: Zephyra Elrick
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 5 foot 5, 60kg, pale skin, long purple curly hair, one blue eye and one gold eye, white and purple dress, bare foot
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

 

-Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No purple hair, no golden eyes

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

our Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! here is the correct race infomation!  No purple hair, no golden eyes

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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