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    Discord: .blonded. or Robbie#4475
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: By being in roleplay. By knowing the limits of my character and by keeping in mind that in every scenario, other players can respond to the situation too, so I have to give them a chance to do so.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It distrupts fair roleplay because it gives your character an edge over other characters. Your character could know, for example, about something happening on the other side of the world, without being there, which isn't "realistic" for the roleplay.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

(PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION - Part II: My character doesn't know her race. She doesn't know her parents. However, she believes she is also part human, not just a Dark Elf, because of her small stature. She is frail, but she is fit and knows how to wield a staff. - Lets me know through discord if my skin and other details are okay or if I need to change them because this is my first time having to design a character for RP in Minecraft, so right now my skin is very simple but I can add to it.))


"My story..." You think about what to tell her, because even you are not sure where you come from... "I uh... I'm still trying to piece it together."

The crone is still waiting for you to give her a proper answer, maybe you can start with your name.

"I'm Elysia Fo-"

"I know who you are", she interrupts. "I was told you would come here to learn about your parents... as they are the ones who told me you would many years ago. I wanted to know how you came here all the way from Nor-Velyth..." This catches you off-guard, and she knows it, so she gives you a moment to process this. "It's a long and treacherous road, I can't imagine it has been easy." You thought you had done a good job travelling silently over the many months of this journey, so the fact that she knew all of this leaves you silent. She takes a sip from a small wooden cup and points at the cushion again. Since she really seems to know you and has let her guard down, you trust she in fact might be the one you were looking for, so you decide to move to the cushion to tell her about your travels, in the hopes that she really is the one you were looking for; your aunt. [...]


Character Name: Elysia Forthwind
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: There's not enough room so I will continue below. 5'9. 120lbs/55kg. White hair, white but greenish skin. Blue/Violet eyes. She wears a burgundy robe.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

-Please change your character's actions to 3rd person
 

-Your Skin and Physical Description does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! Or please take a look at our Skin Archive and Racial Hub for more information!



Please make these changes within 48 hours!
Once you have made the changes, message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or on the forums @MockingbirdArt

Feel free to reach out if you need help!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.


Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

-Please change your character's actions to 3rd person
 

-Your Skin and Physical Description does not match your character’s race you picked! If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! Or please take a look at our Skin Archive and Racial Hub for more information!



If you need help or have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord @mockingbirdart or the forums @MockingbirdArt

 

I recommend joining LOTC's Discord, here is the link! Discord

 

Go to the New Player's category, and go to help chat. Ping @Community team saying "Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application? I'd like to try again!"

 

Here are some Links to also help you out!
 

WIKI

New Player Hub.

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